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December 3, 2010
By Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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You make me smile wider
With each sweet thing you say
You make me laugh harder
At the impersonations and jokes every day
You make me sing louder
To those sappy songs about love
You make me blush deeper
When you ask what I’m thinking of.

You make me feel comfortable
When I’m used to feeling tense
You make me feel understood
When, to most people, I make no sense.
You make me feel alive
When lately I’ve felt withdrawn
You make me feel like letting go
When for too long, I’ve been hanging on.

You make me nervous
But in the best possible way
You make me curious
As my caution falls away
You make me vulnerable
Uncover my pain
You make me content
I can’t possibly complain.

You make me,
You make me….
Fall for you.

© Alexa T., Pompton Plains, NJ

The author's comments:
This is about a guy who makes me pretty 'effin happy :) He is kinda exactly what I've been lookin for in an almost scary way. You know who you are toaster strudel <3 :DDD
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alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 5:23 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Omg! Sorry I didn't reply!!! hahaha hear i am! yeah that is wierd i woulda thought the same thing and dang :( i wish you coulda stayed for 2nd lunch too! i'll prbly text you later who the guy is but i totally know what it's like to hav a broken heart now and he's the only one that could fix it...  
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 5:20 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Omg! Sorry I didn't reply!!! hahaha hear i am! yeah that is wierd i woulda thought the same thing and dang :( i wish you coulda stayed for 2nd lunch too! i'll prbly text you later who the guy is but i totally know what it's like to hav a broken heart now and he's the only one that could fix it...
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 5:18 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Omg! Sorry I didn't reply!!! hahaha hear i am! yeah that is wierd i woulda thought the same thing and dang :( i wish you coulda stayed for 2nd lunch too! i'll prbly text you later who the guy is but i totally know what it's like to hav a broken heart now and he's the only one that could fix it...
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 9 2011 at 6:22 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Sad day no reply :( haha.
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 5 2011 at 5:05 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Haha ohmigosh I'm SO happy for you!!!!! :D Thats super great. I'm DYING to know who is it!!! Is he frome here? In your grade?

I came up to the high school today to see people at lunch, but I coun't stay for 2nd lunch.... I wish I coulda seen you. You have second huh? And I saw you know who and he came right up to me and hugged me really hard all smiling like "Hey!!!" I was like *in my head* wtf? "... Hey *confused smile*...." haha. It was REALLY weird and awkward.

alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 3 2011 at 1:08 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Aww yes I do! That's soooo sweet! he calls you poptart! eeep! I love that! and jus so ya kno i am 100% completely over you know who! It feels great...excet nowwwww i lik this guy who i did wrong cuz i liked him but then i didnt so its kinda crazy and confusing lol
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 3 2011 at 12:34 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Thanks so much :) I'm sure you knwo who and what I'm talking about when I say that. :/ Haha but yeah. He calls me poptart :D
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 3 2011 at 12:12 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Awww! Alex this was really really good I loved the rhyme scheme! uh and it made me tear up haha I'm super happy for you! :)

"You make me feel lik letting go When for too long, I've been hanging on."

Absolutely fantastic!

Toaster strudel? teehee :)