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September 24, 2010
By MrSensitive SILVER, Fresno, California
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I feel like a body with no soul.Like a hollow log I, too, am hollow.One minute I have a passion for something and the next minute that passion fades away until it returns.I feel the wieght of pier pressure as it unloads on my back.I feel like im very confued do to the fact that I have several differn't personality's but I seem to me the only one to notice it

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I was feeling sad at the time and i needed to express it.
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mwahxandxmwa SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 7:23 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
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&quot;Silence is golden...duct tape is silver&quot; - a random T-shirt

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Thank-you for writing. Mwah :D
MrSensitive SILVER said...
on Oct. 19 2010 at 10:21 pm
MrSensitive SILVER, Fresno, California
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thank you it means alot to me.
mwahxandxmwa SILVER said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 6:25 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
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Gahh i just want to hug you, you say exatly how i feel someone completely different from who others see you they take you as a laugh not seriously. Sorry i got a little exstatic. Gret work :D mwah