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Memories

April 20, 2010
By bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”


Sometimes I think about the future and how it’s going to be
But I’ll never forget the memories that became a part of me
Take a moment out of your tiring and hectic life
Look back to the times when you felt so alive
Sit back, close your eyes and relax your brain
Let’s take a trip down memory lane
Think back to your childhood, when you weren’t afraid to be you
You could just walk up to anyone and be friends with someone new
The days at the playground, laughing and having fun
Shooting down the slides and lying in the sun
The first time you took the training wheels off your new bike
You had no idea what that would feel like
Think about the time you met your first crush
The first time you felt that incredible rush
That time you held hands, walking in the park
Looking into each other’s eyes, feeling that spark
Remember the very first time you were kissed
You were so nervous, you almost missed
Think about middle school, that very awkward stage
More work, new braces and growing as you age
Think about the first time you were betrayed by a friend
Someone you thought you could trust, it truly felt like the end
How about freshman year, a new, fresh start
The time when all the cliques grow apart
As high school went on you changed and branched out
You were so naive to what life was really about
Think about the first time you drove a car
With all that freedom you just wanted to go so far
Think about you first day at college, when you were so scared
You weren’t sure if you were prepared
Think about the first time you fell in love
It felt as they were sent from the heavens above
Or the very first time someone broke your heart
If felt like your world was falling apart
Memories should be cherished, the good and the bad
You grow from every one of them, even the sad
So when you’re all out of energy, so old and gray
You should take time to reminisce, smile and say
My life was full of good and bad
Many times I was happy and sad
But in the end, it was a life well lived, you see
Because I’ll always have my memories with me…


The author's comments:
This is a poem I wrote looking back at all my wonderful memories. I'm sure many of you will relate to this poem =D

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on May. 14 2010 at 10:34 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you =)

rykl101 said...
on May. 14 2010 at 10:33 am
this peom is amazing!!! keep writing your work is very interesting

on May. 14 2010 at 10:29 am
WhoaJackJack BRONZE, Roslyn, New York
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Brooke! This is awesome!

 


on May. 14 2010 at 10:28 am
this poem is incredible :D

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jmandel said...
on May. 14 2010 at 10:25 am

This is a very good poem

 


on May. 13 2010 at 9:03 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

aww thank you i appreciate that! and yes this had nothing to do with an ex and its not meant to be a sad poem, but a very happy one =)

VenatraTerra said...
on May. 13 2010 at 8:57 pm
Soccer player: I don't even  think you read the poem. It doesn't seem to be a poem about her ex... and  it is filled with experiences that were once new; to possibly many readers. Maybe U have to get over something.  Brooke, cherish, the good memories, and learn from the bad ones. u don't have to cherish trash.

on May. 13 2010 at 8:48 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Well thank you very much that was my goal =)

Ilovecookies said...
on May. 13 2010 at 8:47 pm
Truthfully. This is beautifully written. I can't see why not put it in a magazine. I usually hate rhyme but in this case I don't mind it all. I can honestly say 'I've been there and done that'.

on May. 13 2010 at 8:46 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you i really wanted everyone to experience they're memories with me so i guess i succeeded =D

VenatraTerra said...
on May. 13 2010 at 8:44 pm
I love this poem genuinely.  I tried to emerse myself within my own memories, and tried to flow with the emotions, that came to mind.

on May. 13 2010 at 8:42 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Awww thank you so much! That means a lot to me!! <3

CartoonKid said...
on May. 13 2010 at 8:39 pm

 

Soccer Player: To me, that's not constructive criticism, that's just assumptions. If I were you, I would re-read the poem and maybe this time it'll get into your head what she wrote about because clearly you've got no idea.

Brooke is it? I think so. Anyways, the poem is beautifully written, the rhythm in it is nice, I like it; I can relate and I think this should be in the magazine. I sure hope to see more of your work. Keep it up.


on May. 13 2010 at 7:15 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you =D

thanasi92 said...
on May. 13 2010 at 7:06 pm
That is beautiful. Yes i can relate to some of those that you said but none the less very accurate to many readers. 

on May. 13 2010 at 6:39 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

haha thanks ;)

on May. 13 2010 at 6:39 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

thank you <3

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on May. 13 2010 at 10:51 am
Here is a constructive criticism that might help you. you should get over who ever you dated. he dumped you. you should write more happy stuff... you know? he obviously dumped you for a reason.. your probably annoying i guess or who knows. maybe ugly? but this heres a advice. forget and go on.