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Memories

April 20, 2010
By bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”


Sometimes I think about the future and how it’s going to be
But I’ll never forget the memories that became a part of me
Take a moment out of your tiring and hectic life
Look back to the times when you felt so alive
Sit back, close your eyes and relax your brain
Let’s take a trip down memory lane
Think back to your childhood, when you weren’t afraid to be you
You could just walk up to anyone and be friends with someone new
The days at the playground, laughing and having fun
Shooting down the slides and lying in the sun
The first time you took the training wheels off your new bike
You had no idea what that would feel like
Think about the time you met your first crush
The first time you felt that incredible rush
That time you held hands, walking in the park
Looking into each other’s eyes, feeling that spark
Remember the very first time you were kissed
You were so nervous, you almost missed
Think about middle school, that very awkward stage
More work, new braces and growing as you age
Think about the first time you were betrayed by a friend
Someone you thought you could trust, it truly felt like the end
How about freshman year, a new, fresh start
The time when all the cliques grow apart
As high school went on you changed and branched out
You were so naive to what life was really about
Think about the first time you drove a car
With all that freedom you just wanted to go so far
Think about you first day at college, when you were so scared
You weren’t sure if you were prepared
Think about the first time you fell in love
It felt as they were sent from the heavens above
Or the very first time someone broke your heart
If felt like your world was falling apart
Memories should be cherished, the good and the bad
You grow from every one of them, even the sad
So when you’re all out of energy, so old and gray
You should take time to reminisce, smile and say
My life was full of good and bad
Many times I was happy and sad
But in the end, it was a life well lived, you see
Because I’ll always have my memories with me…


The author's comments:
This is a poem I wrote looking back at all my wonderful memories. I'm sure many of you will relate to this poem =D

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renise said...
on Oct. 12 2012 at 2:45 pm
SOO GOOD. this poem was actually perfect.

on Jul. 8 2011 at 5:55 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you very much! I'm happy you understood one of the messages I was trying to send through this poem =)

on Jul. 8 2011 at 5:40 pm
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
22 articles 5 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

two thumbs up, i loved it. we all need reminding to slow down and just relax. and it's true, even the bad memories need to be remembered so they won't get repeated. thanks for sharing this part of you :)

 


on May. 2 2011 at 3:46 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you so much! <3

on May. 2 2011 at 8:39 am
shandelarenve SILVER, Buffalo, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Very well spoken.. It's beautiful. :)

 


on Apr. 20 2011 at 3:59 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Awww thank you very much! That was my goal for all my readers! =)

on Apr. 20 2011 at 1:12 pm
lexii_121 BRONZE, Pine Bush, New York
4 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Live your life to the fullest. "

This poem is absolutely amazing (: it definitely brought back some menories for me. I loved it. Keep up the good work!

on Jul. 15 2010 at 11:00 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Aww thanks and i'll keep that in mind =D

inspir3d GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:44 pm
inspir3d GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
11 articles 2 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
We're all just looking for attention, to be discovered overnight. We're all frustrated by the popular ones that claim the limelight before they fall to pieces. So many of us are stuck under the radar--what makes me different? You decide!

Nice work!! This brought back some memories of my own :) Fresh perspective, enjoyable read. But sometime u should try a poem without rhymes, i find it kinda freeing. But that's just me, great job!!

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2010 at 1:48 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

you're welcome, and yeah i will read some of yours

on Jun. 24 2010 at 1:24 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Awww thank you! Most of my poems are rhyming! Yes, I will definitely keep my eyes open to ur work and feel free to check out my other poems 2 =) 

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2010 at 10:42 am
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

Amazing and beautiful... and i envy your ryhming skills. Can you check out some of my stuff, though i'm still waiting for my poems to get approved

on Jun. 6 2010 at 3:29 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you for your opinion and it doesnt matter to me how many comments i have, i just like hearing different people's points of view =D

julia_elg said...
on Jun. 6 2010 at 3:02 am
julia_elg, Valley Village, California
0 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And of course there must be something wrong / In wanting to silence any song." - Robert Frost, "A Minor Bird"

I like the subject of this poem, because even though it talks about happy and sad memories, it also has a very positive view. I'm not sure the rhyming thing completely works - I feel like this is a poem that is fun, yet meaningful. The rhyming sometimes feels too cute, like it's taking away the meaning and making it just fun and fluffy. (Fluffy poems can be good, too, I'm just not sure if that's what you were going for.) Other than the rhyming, which works out pretty well, my only comment is to try to show, not tell. Like when you say you were sliding at the park - that kind of thing can replace just saying that you were having fun or were happy. Maybe put in a few more images like that one, and it will make the poem flow a bit better. Overall, good job!

P.S. Wow, you sure do have a lot of comments! I hope my comment is still helpful among this mass of feedback. ;)


on Jun. 3 2010 at 10:29 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you =)

on Jun. 3 2010 at 2:05 pm
IgniteTheAirwaves PLATINUM, New City, New York
41 articles 37 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you start missing everybody." -J.D. Salinger, Catcher in the Rye

Good job, I liked it.

on Jun. 3 2010 at 10:15 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

alrighty =)

on Jun. 3 2010 at 9:46 am
MustangWriter1813 PLATINUM, Crooks, South Dakota
45 articles 7 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
" No one can told you back besides yourself " MaKayla Claymore class of 2013

bkcrider92: Got another piece out on my page check it out it's called I should have. Havent had a chance to look at your piece yet but I will somtime today!

on Jun. 2 2010 at 10:10 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thanks so much! <3

lalalalala said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 4:09 pm
i loved this poem! maybe you would consider changing the title, because you say "think" a lot to something with the word think inquired in it, but thats just some food for thought. otherwise this is awesome :)