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My sugar is sour

February 25, 2010
By cjsweetie BRONZE, Clewiston, Florida
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Your roses are red my roses are black.
Your violets are blue my violets are green.
Your sugar is sweet my sugar is sour.
You love me and I hate you.

© Steve S., Marblehead, MA

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It was funny when I came up with it in math class.
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cjsweetie BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 11:00 am
cjsweetie BRONZE, Clewiston, Florida
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Thank you very much for for commenting. The poem just kinda happened. i didnt put much feeling into it on purpose.
reillysmiley22 GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 5:46 pm
reillysmiley22 GOLD, Hoosick Falls, New York
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I don think ive said to many serious things that can be admired and arent totally foolish, but my all time favorite quote is "Only those who dare to fail greatly can ever achieve greatly." - Robert F. Kennedy

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very strong, feirce, inspirational
BasketballChick5 said...
on Mar. 31 2010 at 8:58 pm
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Suprisingly i really liked it:)
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 3:07 pm
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very unique... nice job. keep writing!!!!
cjsweetie BRONZE said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 12:28 pm
cjsweetie BRONZE, Clewiston, Florida
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Thank you :)
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hahahah very cute! i like it!
cjsweetie BRONZE said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 10:14 am
cjsweetie BRONZE, Clewiston, Florida
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Thanks alot
Milo! said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 4:01 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.