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"Kiss"

February 19, 2010
By HappySappy SILVER, Berlin Heights, Ohio
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Courage is the magic that turns dreams into reality.<br /> <br /> An eye for an eye makes the whole world go blind.

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He moves toward me,
Almost sprinting just to get to me.
And then when he is finally right beside me,
He leans over,
Lips pursed,
Body sweating,
Eyes closed,
Mind blank.
And angels reach my own lips.
They are laughing and tickling me.
They are kissing me as if I had just died,
And it was the only was to get accepted into Heaven.
Now I open my eyes.
He is there with his perfect lips touching mine.
He was those angels.
He is an angel.
We part,
Look away shyly.
A flicker of the eyes,
And I can just tell there is love in those mysterious deep waters.
His love is pumping through his veins.
And then through mine.
We are now one.

© Lindsay T., Vernon, TX

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I have never kissed anyone ever so is this poem realistic??
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so_joy SILVER said...
on Sep. 8 2012 at 8:22 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Aww this is adorable! Great job! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks! 
Lola_Sveroski said...
on Apr. 3 2011 at 8:36 pm
Lola_Sveroski, Manschef, Ohio
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And now that I /do/ know, I'd say yes, realistic.
NeverEnding... GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 11:50 am
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I love your poem :) its so sweet

 

i wish it was like that for me lol that woulda been so nice. instead, i didnt know what i was doing and my bf slobbered on my chin lol embarrasing to the max lol

Escaped GOLD said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 2:31 pm
Escaped GOLD, Litchfield, Illinois
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Lovely9:..xoxo
Sallysunsine:-) said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 8:49 pm
it was amazing btw i luv your wrighting style it really inspires me to findmy true luv thank you very much without you i would be nothing
GreenGirl13 SILVER said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 8:06 pm
GreenGirl13 SILVER, Groveland, Florida
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This is sweet, but I cannot say if it was realistic or not. PLEASE ckeck out my work, as well.
HappySappy SILVER said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 6:42 pm
HappySappy SILVER, Berlin Heights, Ohio
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thanks! and ill look at your stuff too!
AlyssaFama SILVER said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 6:01 pm
AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
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this was so amazing! something everyone can relate to at least one time in their life. check out some of my stuff too
Lola_Sveroski said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 7:12 pm
Lola_Sveroski, Manschef, Ohio
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Loved it... I would say realistic... not that I would know.
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 5:02 pm
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heyy y didn't you ever show me this poem? ITS GOOD!!!! hey i got my copy of the magazine today so im taking it to the pop trip so you and everybody else can see it!! anyway, this IS realistic

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