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If I could.......

February 18, 2010
By Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain


I sat playing my guitar.
Board.
I sat waiting....
Waiting for some one I really diden't know.
I wanted to move on....
But the way he left me was cold ,unintentional.
Why did I want someone soo badly I knew I coulden't have.
I had allways planed on telling him how I felt.
Then I found out my best friend liked him too but the funny part is...we diden't fight over him like people do on TV ,or in the novel you're reading.
I still sit here and imagine what I would tell him.
But I would be scared.
When it came down too it I would never say somthing witty and walk away.
If I loved him soo much why not?
When I think about it...
would I tell him about the "secret" world , My friend and I made up around him. Would I tell him our nickname for him was Noah? Today I would but ,what about Last week? Would I have told him then?
There was no closure...
So is that what I need closure?
If I could talk to him one last time what would I say?
"I love you" or better " I loved you" no, no I woulden't.
I would ask him simply " Whats up?"If it came to me ,and as he will walk away I will call his name and I would say " Do you remeber my friend Noah..I don't know how to say this you are Noah," I would walk away faster than he could catch me, I would leave him Hanging......Why?


The author's comments:
This diden't realy happen but, the way wrote it was weird...I just sat at my computer on day and typed.

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Riley141 GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2010 at 1:16 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain

I don't know it depends what you like.... i have a bunch of chezzy romance stuff and one review and also one called dreaming...so yeah

on Jun. 11 2010 at 4:40 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

no problem at all! i love reading people's works. tell me if you have anything else you'd like to read. i'd love to! (:

Riley141 GOLD said...
on Jun. 11 2010 at 3:09 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain

Thanks...you just made my day:)

on Jun. 10 2010 at 6:29 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

this is really good! i love how you end it with "...why?" it made your poem really strong. thx for reviewing my poem! i really liked yours. keep writing! (:

Riley141 GOLD said...
on May. 11 2010 at 3:17 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain

Yeah I will totaly read your work!

on Apr. 7 2010 at 8:14 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart.&quot;~William Hazlitt<br /> &quot;Be yourself, everyone else is taken.&quot;

I really liked your writing style! Excellent work! Please keep on writing. Please, if you get the chance, may you please comment on my new article "Is There Reason?" Much appreciated. Excellent work! Keep on writing

Riley141 GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 4:39 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest.&quot; Mark Twain

Wow thanks alot... I wasn't sure if anyone would like it but thanks. I just started writing a story with alternating points of veiw...so I'm verry happy.

on Mar. 29 2010 at 3:23 am
Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
48 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.<br /> -the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...<br /> -good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.

i like ur style of writing!

keep writing! 5 stars!


Riley141 GOLD said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 3:21 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest.&quot; Mark Twain

Thanx... I'll take a look at your work!

on Mar. 21 2010 at 9:22 pm
AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Most people want to be the sun that brightens your day. I&#039;d rather be the moon that shines down on you in your darkest hour.

this was very good! keep writing and check out some of my work