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Fallen rose

February 22, 2010
By Bleeder GOLD, Peoria, Arizona
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rose

so beautiful and innocence

no harm, pain, haunting came her way

untill the blood moon came

everything change forever

happiness became miserley

gift became curse

life became death

then rose fell

fallen rose

still beautiful but

full with pain and death

no more a angel of heaven

but a angel of

death and shadows

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AmberAnn_d-_-b SILVER said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 7:46 am
AmberAnn_d-_-b SILVER, Laconia, New Hampshire
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very nice rythm, you need to read over things. I noticed a few mistaked such as innocence should be inoccent and untill-- until. Thank you for posting this, it is a lovely poem.