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February 13, 2010
By Wallflower PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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If you aren't happy alone then you're not going to be happy with anyone else.

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'please don't go'
he begged me to stay
lead me not into temptaion
but deliver us from evil
I hugged him goodbye
but he refused to let go
and now i'm trapped in a
basement full of cobwebs
just like the ones resting
on our love without a pulse.

© Sarah F., Naples, FL

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'tis probably deserved for answering his desperate whys with God as a justification
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Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2010 at 9:02 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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Wow!! this is very powerful in such a short amount of lines!!! awesome job-i really enjoyed reading this!!! please check out some of my work when you get the chance!!:)