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January 7, 2010
By CBB1112 BRONZE, Newark, Delaware
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CBB1112 BRONZE, Newark, Delaware
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When people get hurt, they learn to hate. When people hurt others, they become hated and are racked with guilt. But knowing that pain allows people to be kind. Pain allows people to grow. And how you grow up is up to you. You know pain, you think about it, and the answer you find is up to you.

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Blinded from the start,
then were torn apart!
Never asked the question,
up til this confession!

As I try to take your hand,
hoping you would understand!
You get up and walk away,
I try to make you stay!
You say "no" "never",
but I see something that will last forever!

You start to hate,
this isn't our fate!
I try to make things right,
so the future will be bright!

As I try to take your hand,
hoping you would understand!
You get up and walk away,
I try to make you stay!
You say "no" "never",
but I see something that will last forever!

I try to make love mend,
praying we will betogether in the end!
So I go and shout,
hey Alana do you want to go out?!

The author's comments:
This is about the love of my dreams hoping one day we will be together but she doesn't like me and now she won't talk to me. I never asked her that special question but this about that confession!
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CBB1112 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 9:50 am
CBB1112 BRONZE, Newark, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
When people get hurt, they learn to hate. When people hurt others, they become hated and are racked with guilt. But knowing that pain allows people to be kind. Pain allows people to grow. And how you grow up is up to you. You know pain, you think about it, and the answer you find is up to you.

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well you commented on the improved version already and yeah I know, I do hate writing much.
Kaitbryn PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 10 2010 at 6:14 pm
Kaitbryn PLATINUM, Cushing, Oklahoma
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In economics, hope and faith coexist with great scientific pretension and also a deep desire for respectability. -- John Kenneth Galbraith<br /> <br /> Very soon we must all face the decision between what is easy and what is right. -- Albus Dumbledore

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Really good. Hey read your profile, if you hate to write, how come you have a posted poem?