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Whatever feelings you have while reading this

October 22, 2009
By Nicolioliolsterz_1 GOLD, Manassas, Virginia
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All good is hard. All evil is easy. Dying, losing, cheating, and mediocrity is easy. Stay away from easy. <br /> Scott Alexander <br /> <br /> A word is dead when it is said, some say. I say it just begins to live that day. <br /> Emily Dickinson <br /> <br /> Not knowing when the dawn will come I open every door. <br /> Emily Dickinson

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Any other day

I wouldn't have delt with this situation this way

Learning to forgive and forget

Just teaching myself not to look back at the past

For the past only brings forth the water flow and sorrow

Dont't think my heart can take anymore pain

As of now its at a crossroad

Trust & Pain

Wher do I go from here?

All I can do is follwo the path of my tears

Sometimes I try to listen and follow my heart

But trying to listen to your heart is like climbing a mountain

I climb and climb and climb

It just seems like this mountain is growing larger amd wider and thicker to block out

Heart is burning like skin over an open fire

It just can't take all of this confusion

Hoping and wishing one day that I'll reach the top of this mountain

That'll Be the day I find the real truth.

© Brian G., Phoenix, AZ

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music_lover PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 9:13 pm
music_lover PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
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MY quote: &quot;Without music, life would be absolutely pointless.... Music is my life and it always will be!&quot;

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Wow great poem! Hey where was that picture taken? It looks familiar.... :D
meggers SILVER said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 10:45 am
meggers SILVER, San Angelo, Texas
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if u cant say something nice then dont say anything at all

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this is a great poem i really thought it had some truth to it. check out someof mine. love waits and crush
Nicolioliolsterz_1 GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 8:04 am
Nicolioliolsterz_1 GOLD, Manassas, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
All good is hard. All evil is easy. Dying, losing, cheating, and mediocrity is easy. Stay away from easy. <br /> Scott Alexander <br /> <br /> A word is dead when it is said, some say. I say it just begins to live that day. <br /> Emily Dickinson <br /> <br /> Not knowing when the dawn will come I open every door. <br /> Emily Dickinson

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awwww thanx my fellow poet.and I really appreciate the works.Actually,i'm writing a poem now and i think they'll go perfectly with the flow of it.thanx a million!
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Nov. 10 2009 at 2:41 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx