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Thank-you

October 22, 2009
By tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
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tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
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"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

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Thank-you for building me up with your words
Even though they weren't worth a turd.
You built me up to tear me down
But I've decided I'm not gunna frown.

I'm done with this heartache,
The love you gave was fake.
I'm done with your lies,
That's what's lead me to my cries.

You put me through hell
But no one heard my yell
You promised me forever
I thought that'd end never

Don't give me your lines,
It's time to pay your fines.
I've survived your brutal hit,
I'm done dealing with your s***.

The author's comments:
This is one of my sarcastic essays. I'm extremely sarcastic, so I believe this gives my readers a view of my personality more than my talent.
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