Angel | Teen Ink


October 26, 2009
By cheerdanceguard09 BRONZE, Fort Hunter, New York
cheerdanceguard09 BRONZE, Fort Hunter, New York
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Favorite Quote:
there are 3 things a girl needs in life love to make her weak alcohol to make her strong and best friends when both things make her hit the floor

I get the phone call
Rush to her house
Can’t believe my eyes
Limp on the floor
No movement
Not even a shallow breath
She’s an angel now

The bells toll
Tears Fall
My Best Friend is gone
The priest speaks in a solemn voice
More tears
She’s an angel now

I stare at my phone
I think to dial her number
Ask if she wants to chill
Then I remember
She’s an angel now

So young
So full of life
This was the last thing
Anyone expected
Then there was a bang
A bang that forever changed
Many of our lives
A bang that forever ended hers
Walking with loved ones past
She’s an angel now

The author's comments:
written about one of my best friend's Sarah who committed su icide because of the discrmination and harrassment she faced because she was lesbian

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on May. 3 2010 at 10:20 am
Jade-McKaye SILVER, West Jordan, Utah
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what happened to a dream?

that was amazing, emotion seeped through every word, absolutely beautiful!

893201501 said...
on Nov. 3 2009 at 8:55 pm
893201501, Calgary, Other
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"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind." ~ Dr. Seuss

Wow. That was so... so meaningful. I've never been through anything like this and it brought tears to my eyes. I'm so sorry for your loss. Keep writing! It helps with the pain. <3