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He Started To Say It

September 7, 2009
By MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

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He started to say it-
He started to say it!
He started to say-
I love you.
He stopped himself
and changed it to something else.
But he started to say it.
Then he said he needs me.
He tried to cover-up
by saying he needed me-
in order to bug and annoy me.
But it's there.
He said it-
And his friend heard it!
I know I shouldn't get too excited,
I know
I shouldn't read too much into it-
but still.
He almost said it-
He's almost there!
I wont get to excited,
but I'll remember it.
He's said, "I Love You" before,
no-
He yelled it.
He had jerked his arms
around my neck
and hugged me in a tight squeeze.
I didn't think he was joking-
but I let it be.
Now I'm almost certain-
That he does have feelings for me.

The author's comments:
Lol, as you can see i was out of it and WAY over-excited when I wrote this one :)
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MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:10 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

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:) I'm glad you love it, this always reminds me of middle school days with him and while I miss it, I'm happy right where I am now. It feels good to be able to go back and read these old poems and remember the past.
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 4:23 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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i love love LOVED it!