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The Carousel

January 6, 2010
By hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching


Its not like I can stop,
I can’t just leave it all behind,
I know I can’t tell anybody,
but I can’t get it off my mind,

I haunts me like a ghost,
hangs over me like a storm,
but somehow you can’t see it,
beneath this act that I perform.

I’m such a hypocrite,
a liar, a horrible friend,
but I’m too scared to tell you,
scared our friendship will end.

We’re going in circles,
my life’s become a carousel,
I want so badly to just get off,
to escape this living hell.



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This article has 97 comments.


on Jan. 26 2010 at 11:26 am
Very good job! This is my favorite poem by you! =D

on Jan. 23 2010 at 3:27 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

but still. i guess we all have our preferences. in my opinion, that one is wayyy sadder than this one... =[

Nicky043 said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 1:17 pm
well, my favorite poem sounds pretty "real" to me. :p

on Jan. 23 2010 at 12:57 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

oh, i see. fuzzy feelings are overrated though. its more fun when the poetry is true. real. id rather read about something to know someone else feels the same when I feel bad then a "oh life is spectacular poem" just me though...

Nicky043 said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 12:50 pm
its my most favorite because its a happy poem. and it makes me feel good. this one is amazing, but it doesnt exactly give me a fuzzy feeling inside.

on Jan. 23 2010 at 12:46 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thanks.... but i dont understand why your "most favorite" is your "most favorite"... ?

Nicky043 said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 12:45 pm
theres nothing i can say that isnt too much different than everyone elses comments. not my favorite, but still really good :D

on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:47 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thanks!!! <3

on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:47 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thanks!!!! =D

rimdncr71 said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:46 pm
i loveeee it. <3 and i agree that its one of my favorites too

on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:43 pm
you are such a talented writer. the poem flows and rhymes beautifully. all around amazing!

on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:39 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thank you soo much!!! way to have a very creative name... =P

Bobbb said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:38 pm
Awesome poem!

on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:35 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thanks... =D

ikicksacks said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 9:34 pm
Great flow, good rhymes, depicts depression very well.

on Jan. 22 2010 at 8:05 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thanks, darling, i think its my favorite... like hands down favorite... =D

on Jan. 21 2010 at 8:55 pm
H, this is amazing. im thinking that this might be one of my favorites!