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lips touching
October 18, 2009
Eyes searching.
Heart beating.
Hands caressing.
Nose smelling.
Knees trembling.
Fingers caressing.
Heavy breathing.
Lips touching.
Baby comming.
You leaving.
Me crying.
Baby growing.
No father.
Just me.
You left.
no surprise.
Later on,
You come back.
I dont want you.
He doesnt need you.
You scream.
I scream.
You hit.
I fall.
Baby cries.
His mommy dies.
Now there's nobody.
© Alexis S., Aventura, FL
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frogsof2015 SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 1:56 pm
Wow. That was great beyond belief.
LeilaniLives PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 8:11 am
That's sad, but touching. I'm glad you wrote this piece. It's like the flowing of thoughts rather than describing the story; and, it all flows together from the line of thoughts and emotions to a story. Beautiful.
GreenLover SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:11 pm
wow that is so true. nice work keep it up. if you dont mind could you take a look at some of my poems???
Milo! said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 4:15 pm
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
literaryaddict PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 26 2009 at 9:16 pm
oh my gosh that was so powerful
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