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2009

February 20, 2009
By Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments

I wish you could press undo like in the games
and forget all the times people called me names
to fix all the messes i made
i would do anything to trade
just to start over
throw it all away
forget the past
leave it behind
start anew it's 2009


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on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:43 pm
MoreThanYouKnow PLATINUM, Camarillo, California
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hahaha ohkay thanx and *shrug* how did yooouuu get so good little miss?

on Mar. 7 2010 at 1:58 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
omg shut up ur writing is friken awesome.! LOL how did you get so good.?

on Mar. 5 2010 at 6:07 pm
MoreThanYouKnow PLATINUM, Camarillo, California
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uhm yeah i put a lot up last yr. and they arent near as good as urs haha :) a lot of mine are on quizilla i think ill transfer some of em to here. maybe

on Mar. 1 2010 at 2:36 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
thanks :) OMG have you put any poem on here yet.?!?! CANT WAIT TO READ THEM.!

on Feb. 26 2010 at 10:26 pm
MoreThanYouKnow PLATINUM, Camarillo, California
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its jessalyn :) you have always been so great at writing. this brings back emmories of last year. fantastic job. byeee

on Feb. 20 2010 at 1:56 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
okayy :) Did you check out my other ones too.?

on Feb. 19 2010 at 5:35 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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this is great pls cheack my poems out!

on Feb. 18 2010 at 2:44 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
thanks again :)

on Feb. 18 2010 at 2:43 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
thanks lol i know its 2010 lol.! Do u have any writings on here.?

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on Feb. 17 2010 at 2:38 pm
twiwrite GOLD, Modesto, California
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Favorite Quote:
none :P

like amanda said you dont have to rhym but i think this stylr fits you fine. if it works for you thats all that matters. i personaaly like mettered or free verse.

on Feb. 17 2010 at 8:47 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

It's pretty.... it's not 2009 anymore, but i get the feel!! It's a new year and a new beginning!!!

on Jan. 19 2010 at 3:04 pm
amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
33 articles 2 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let anybody tell you who you are; don't let anyone tell you that you don't deserve what you're willing to work for.
Never give up; you\'ll never know how far you could go until you try to get to where you want to go.

Right on :)

i like it. again though, Don't feel like you have to rhyme.