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A Crush

February 10, 2014
By SophiaD11 PLATINUM, Kissimmee, Florida
SophiaD11 PLATINUM, Kissimmee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Intelligence without ambition is like a bird without wings."-Salvador Dali


He said my name today!
I nearly fell off my chair.
One minute my mind was clouded...
The next minute it was like an arrow had pierced the din.

I nearly fell off my chair.
The classroom was an amusement park, but then,
The next minute it was an arrow had pierced the din.
His voice was a pulley, a lever that made my head spring up.

The classroom was an amusement park, but then,
I heard him say it.
His voice was a pulley, a lever that made my head spring up.
Except it wasn't me he was calling.

I heard him say it.
One minute my mind was clouded...
Except it wasn't me he was calling.
He said a name today.


The author's comments:
This particular poem is the format of a Pantoum.

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on May. 8 2014 at 4:59 pm
bewareofbunnyrabbits SILVER, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Empty yourself and let the universe fill you." -Yogi Tea

I like the different form you chose to write in