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When I'm Down

August 2, 2010
By fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

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People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk. <br /> -Stephen King :P<br /> The trust of the innocent is the liar&#039;s most useful tool. <br /> -Stephen King<br /> Now that we&#039;re here, <br /> It&#039;s so far away <br /> All the struggle we thought was in vain <br /> All the mistakes, <br /> One life contained <br /> They all finally start to go away <br /> Now that we&#039;re here its so far away <br /> And I feel like I can face the day <br /> I can forgive and I&rsquo;m not ashamed to be the person that I am today


Everyone around me keeps falling in love,
Is someone sending me a message from above?,
Maybe loves not meant to be,
Maybe loves just not for me,

I'm supose to be happy all the time,
But why is crying such a crime?,
Everyone's used to seeing one side of me,
They don't know what all I can be,

Making people smile is what I do best,
Smile and be happy; forget the rest,
No one is sad for long when I'm around,
For happiness can always be found,

But when I'm weak and feeling down,
Will everyone leave; will they be around?,
To offer me a caring hand,
To pick me up and help me stand,

Who can comfort me when I'm all alone,
Is everyones heart made of stone?,
I've been there when a friends in need,
But will they return to me the same noble deed?,

When I've fallen down,
Will anyone ever come around?



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on Nov. 6 2010 at 6:14 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

i love it though KEEP IT UP AND YOUR SURELY BECOME FAMOUS

on Nov. 6 2010 at 10:22 am
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk. <br /> -Stephen King :P<br /> The trust of the innocent is the liar&#039;s most useful tool. <br /> -Stephen King<br /> Now that we&#039;re here, <br /> It&#039;s so far away <br /> All the struggle we thought was in vain <br /> All the mistakes, <br /> One life contained <br /> They all finally start to go away <br /> Now that we&#039;re here its so far away <br /> And I feel like I can face the day <br /> I can forgive and I&rsquo;m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

lolz thanks alot, i wrote some more poems too a couple days ago that im going to be posting so keep a look out for them:) but i dont give anyone my poems sorry

on Nov. 5 2010 at 4:53 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

OMG OMG OMG OMG I just wanna print this and give it to all my so called friends...... I ABSOLUTLY LOVED THIS ON OYU SOULD EMAIL ME IT

on Sep. 2 2010 at 8:34 pm
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk. <br /> -Stephen King :P<br /> The trust of the innocent is the liar&#039;s most useful tool. <br /> -Stephen King<br /> Now that we&#039;re here, <br /> It&#039;s so far away <br /> All the struggle we thought was in vain <br /> All the mistakes, <br /> One life contained <br /> They all finally start to go away <br /> Now that we&#039;re here its so far away <br /> And I feel like I can face the day <br /> I can forgive and I&rsquo;m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

wooo first comment lol just kidding anyways most of my poems r love poems i'm not sure why considering i've never been in love but thanks to everyone who reads them and leaves me feedback:)