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you and me

August 21, 2009
By PLATINUM, Pleasant Valley, Iowa PLATINUM, Pleasant Valley, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
i admire darkness, its so pretty,
i wish i could be pretty like that...

you and me are frieds
friends and thats it
you have who you love
but what you cant see
is that she is never going to love you back
everyone can see that

you and me are friends
we open up
we talk
and when we talk
its always about anything and everything
and thats good

you and me are friends
but cant you see?
you're the only one
that can make me smile constantly
that can make my s***tiest day
turn into the best
cant you see?
that maybe
just maybe
i think i might love you...

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on May. 23 2010 at 7:23 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

great poem

on Jan. 3 2010 at 8:17 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

oooh this is great! :) i love this piece. it shows the truest of relationships of your best guy friend being the one you may be starting to love :) very very well written! LOVED IT! :) :)

silence.... said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 3:18 pm
wow i love this poem and can relate its amazing best one sofar today