Willow | Teen Ink


May 10, 2008
By Megan Rock BRONZE, Maumee, Ohio
Megan Rock BRONZE, Maumee, Ohio
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How doth the weeping willow grow?
Leafed branches drip like rain;
Its seeds, the weary limbs do sow
And make the water plain.

This will certify that the above work is completely original.
Megan Rock

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mjy012 said...
on Oct. 15 2018 at 11:30 am
mjy012, Duluth, Georgia
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This is great. I'd love to see more work from you!

Kiana_M BRONZE said...
on Aug. 14 2009 at 5:53 pm
Kiana_M BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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It's really good,

your word choice is very old-fashioned and wonderful,

it's a very lovely poem :) Good job.

- Kiana (Rate my latest poem, please? :D)

on Aug. 9 2009 at 9:47 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Great poem! I love the description in this poem, it is beautiful! The willow tree is also my favourite tree,which makes me love the poem even more!!

on May. 5 2009 at 12:09 am
bakinboy1 BRONZE, New York, New York
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would love to see more!!!!

on May. 2 2009 at 9:25 pm
You could lengthen the poem because the effect the poem could have, it doesn't have at the moment. To me the poem isn't done yet.

on Apr. 9 2009 at 2:59 am
Megatron SILVER, Creswell, Oregon
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Wow, I really like the style that is in. Too bad it's so short!

Cat said...
on Jan. 21 2009 at 10:18 pm
This is incredible.

Tess said...
on Oct. 19 2008 at 4:26 pm
Nice imagry, liked your olden day speech, too, it has a nice touch. Some people with no poetic background might find the olden day speech confusing, so I'd try to add some rhyming in.