America | Teen Ink


April 22, 2009
By splatterpunk PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
splatterpunk PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
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Revolution, causeing world war
corruption, killing the poor
Idealology, social loar
socialology, dwelt in insanity
In America, Evil galore
In America, Land of the greedy
Is America, Satins Man Whore

The mark of evil
was placed upon us
Evil Mark, Evil Start
Bleeding upon us
corrupting the good
scarin us
as an Orwellinan Country
not making things seen
for nothing is redeemed

People going through
my mind
Thought crimes, Thought crimes
This is an Orwellian time
so when horrors rise
and people lie
dissappearing form existence
no explination Just
Thought crimes

People running the government
Taking my time
Rebelious thought,Rebelious thought
isn't scaring us
for we live in an
orwellian government
revolution for injustice
Rebelious thought

America has become
modern day dodaumon
social lust, social lust
wanting to fit in
praising celebritys
for we dwell in a
orwellian society
were good people die
and bad people live
social lust

No thought crimes
Attack the government
destroy society
devour Idealology
fro we dwell in
a place
called hell

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on Nov. 26 2009 at 9:21 pm
splatterpunk PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
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yes i have have you

on Nov. 9 2009 at 8:36 pm
splatterpunk PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
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yes this is true but i am just pointing out the problems that go on in the world that we live in for we have the problems that were and are being passed on to use the next generation

on Aug. 17 2009 at 7:11 pm
MeghanMichelle GOLD, Hooksett, New Hampshire
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Strong opinions. But America does not have it bad when you look at some other countries.

on Aug. 17 2009 at 5:01 am
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

I really like this poem. Its angry, but its good AND TRUE! I can tell that a lot of thought must have gone into this. Its hard to be patriotic when you realize all this. Although America is a little better than most of the third world countries. Anyways, good poem!

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 14 2009 at 1:06 am
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

Hmmmm. . .we are well on our way with Obama in office. Very angry poem, very good. I like the reference to George Orwell. . .You read 1984?