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Empty

July 19, 2009
By jesss2009 SILVER, Kearny, New Jersey
jesss2009 SILVER, Kearny, New Jersey
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An empty room
An empty soul
An empty heart
No one here to console this broken soul
No one to end this misery filled life
No one to defend this empty body
No one
Absolutely no one..
You left me to fend for myself knowing I was weak
And i fell to the ground
Alone
Lonely like this room
I'm empty
Barren
Unable to love
Unable to care
Unable to feel.


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece of writing a while back and i wrote it in a very dark spot of my life. This was written when someone very special in my life left me. I hope you really see the meaning behind this writing.

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on Aug. 2 2009 at 8:12 pm
Wow. That was my first reaction when I read this for the first time, and it stays the same. Such incredible writing, such deep emotion. Beautiful.