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In the Rain

May 13, 2009
By blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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I’m listening to music
and typing up this poem
and watching the rain fall down
and listening to the thunder.

The rain reminds me of so much
because it reminds me of me
and it reminds me of you
and it reminds me of, everything

It reminds me of coffee
because I love rain and I love the smell of coffee
and it reminds me of vanilla
because that’s your favorite scent
and rain is your favorite weather, too.

I want to be outside in the rain.
There isn’t any place I’d rather be
than in the rain,
with you.

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on Nov. 8 2010 at 3:38 pm
A_Fate_Unknown BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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im not such a fan of rain myself :) more of a sunshine person i do like the message of the piece though

on Jul. 25 2010 at 11:14 pm
racheldxo BRONZE, Metairie, Louisiana
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this is great.

on Oct. 4 2009 at 3:23 pm
shakedra<3 SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
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i jus luve it

on Sep. 2 2009 at 1:39 pm
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
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wow this is awesome. so easy to relate to... i love crying in the rain.

on Aug. 8 2009 at 11:03 pm
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
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i love this wen it rains i go out nd cry cause ppl cant tell i am in tears i only cry in the rain

on May. 20 2009 at 1:27 am
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
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Wow this is great. Easilly(sp) connectible and I love it. One of my fav. quotes is "I love walking in the rain because no one can tell I am crying"!!

on May. 19 2009 at 3:35 am
RheaD.Ravenfinger BRONZE, Juneau, Alaska
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I love the rain too! I like the smell of coffee and vanilla but I don't like the taste. :)