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January 16, 2009
By Travis Rhodes BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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What am I doing here?...Do i realy belong?...What am I doing here?...Are we realy getting along?...What am I doing here?...with a sad crying face...What am I doing here?...in this horrible depressed place...What am I doing here?...on my knees at a pleed...What am I doing here?...Without you and in need...What am I doing here?...All alone,being abused...What am I doing here?...being stepped on,being used...What am I doing here?...Now I know why...What am I doing here?...sitting on my bed,waiting to cry...What am I doing here?...My reason is true...What am I doing here?...Im here because of you.

© Wajida S., Shrewsbury, MA

The author's comments:
What inspired me me to write the poem you see uptheir was the people around me. Everyone around me whether i knew it or not, were taking advantege of me.They used me.The only thing keeping me from throwing my life down the drain was someone who,when they said "I love you". they meant it so I dedicate this poem to my girlfriend, Hailee.
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_xoxo__riri_ BRONZE said...
on Dec. 11 2015 at 11:26 pm
_xoxo__riri_ BRONZE, Richmond, Texas
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Very Good , And Very Inspiring
sgriesmeyer BRONZE said...
on Apr. 2 2014 at 12:23 pm
sgriesmeyer BRONZE, Wyoming, Michigan
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I agree very much.
Kaylee Dillard BRONZE said...
on Apr. 2 2014 at 12:12 pm
Kaylee Dillard BRONZE, Wyoming, Michigan
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This is great and very inspirational. 
Travis said...
on Apr. 10 2011 at 6:15 pm
Thank you! :-) Not everyday someone understands your difficulty legitimately and not sympatheticly.
Helene BRONZE said...
on Apr. 8 2011 at 10:41 pm
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You took the words right out of my mouth no joke!!!!
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on Mar. 8 2011 at 7:24 pm
teacat749 BRONZE, Whitefish Bay, Wisconsin
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Awww! This is so sweet!
Navi-Talmid-Shel-Seraphim said...
on Dec. 30 2010 at 4:38 pm
Very good poem. Funny thing though, we share the same first name: Travis.
BrokenInnocence said...
on Nov. 25 2010 at 9:37 pm
no prob. :)
TJTR said...
on Nov. 25 2010 at 7:47 pm
thank you                                     
BrokenInnocence said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 4:05 pm
ok this is like so sweeet.