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To Be a Monster
February 27, 2011
Summary:
I see you’ve chosen this. Interesting. It must mean that you have good taste. This is my story of how I, a teenage girl of almost total normalcy, became a monster, a beast, a creature of the dark. There are many places to start. I could begin at my birth and continue on based upon a collection of childhood stories of me doing cute things told by my parents, but that’s not how you start a story like this. You start with the end, or maybe the near-end. Once you've entered my world, there is no going back. You've been warned, so enjoy the ride as best you can.
DinoNugget
To Be a Monster
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This book has 19 comments.
The dialogue is very realistic, but in the beginning, they should have been separated into paragraphs. I do like what you have so far, and I'd love it more if you expanded on the chapters a bit more. The idea is very cool and I'd love to read more :)
jackieyimlovah said...
on Sep. 3 2011 at 4:06 pm
omgee its so good! i love it!
SilentlyRising GOLD said...
on Sep. 3 2011 at 1:50 pm
Thanks! There does seem to be a surplus of vampire books ever since Twilight became popular.
BriannaLeigh SILVER said...
on Sep. 3 2011 at 9:44 am
I admit, I haven't finished it yet, but it's nice to see something so well written not entirely focused on "vampire romance".
Pedophobic BRONZE said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 3:09 pm
Thanks thatbwas helpful :B
SilentlyRising GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 9:34 am
Sorry, TI hasn't had the time to make that button available for books and such.
Pedophobic BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 5:29 pm
lol im a noob here
'hi oldfags :]
but i dont know how to add books or authors to my favorites ;----;
can you tell me?
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2011 at 8:28 pm
This is a good start. The only criticism I have is to put dialogue on a line separate from your paragraphs more often. It just makes it easier to read.
GlassXRose BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2011 at 7:16 pm
You're doing a GREAT job! I can tell you're going to get better and better, and this story will be polished and sanded down until it is PERFECT!
x-CaptainMonica-x BRONZE said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 7:59 pm
"ultimate doom" i like how that sounds
SilentlyRising GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 6:34 pm
Haha! It's only been a few days! I'll write more once the homework flow slows a bit.
SilentlyRising GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2011 at 7:31 pm
I know... :-/ I had the story just collecting dust on my computer, so I decided to post it, imperfections and all, just to see what kind of feedback it would get. So far, pretty positive. I appriciate your input! :)
MysteryHeart GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 10:07 am
Very VERY VERY!!!!! RAW manuscript, but great story line. you should try to make the chapters longer.... if you got a good editor to put his or her input in andchange some thingsadd some stuff this would be amazing
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