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Don't Need Anyone
Summary:
But the chances of those happening are nil.
A million health issues that won't go away.
Parents determined to blow their vocal cords.
A concerned, troubled best friend.
A missing brother.
A strange, artistic guy.
A crazy girl determined to succeed.
What does that add up to?
Filled with laughs, probably not a whole lot of tears, butt-plants and balloons sprouting from kitty bums, follow Renee as she struggles to suppress her feelings(and sarcastic comments) and find her brother before it's too late.
Lexie B.
Don't Need Anyone
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Hehe thank you Angie! =D
....thirteen? o_O
I think you're thinking of I'm Just Thirteen. ;D That's a different book. Renee is 16.
I know that you have had a TON of feedback on Inkpop. And they did such a good job with the feedback I really don't have any criticism. :o
My only question is: people date that much at thirteen now? To me, this story sounds like it'd be from someone older than a thirteen year old, but that's just me.
I think I'm going to finish reading this on Inkpop because it was amazing. :)
You definitely need to send some queries about publishing because it was amazing. I'd definitely buy it!
Now I feel really bad because I don't have any real advice on how to improve it. :o The spacing was kinda...bad, but I know that's TeenInk's fault. D:
Good job! :)
Thank you! =D I'm glad you like it. I probably won't post more until they disable copy & paste, but the whole thing is posted on inkpop. =)
And I will definitely try to check that out. =D
Haha thank you so much! XD
I intend to keep writing! D= -runs away from pitchforks-
And yes, I just realized that irony. xD
I read beyond the first chapter because that's what thorough critiquing is all about. And heck, it was just THAT good. (: I liked the voices you gave each character so they were witty, humorous and memorable. There was never a boring patch anywhere so the storyline flowed very easily. The writing was definitely fantastic because it was almost like a movie was playing in my head. (: If this was published, I would probably purchase this novel in a heartbeat. The way you incorporated humor, pain (Jared's disappearance), family problems and opportunity for romance (Cole) in 3 chapters was amazing. I don't have anything bad to say. o: Just keep writing! -evil glare- (I will hunt you down if I don't get to read anymore of this awesome work. Just kidding.) ...or am I? :D
P.S. The irony between the "Goober Cookie Monster" on my thread and the cookie dough air freshener made me laugh. (: Wow, I'm weird at critiquing work. Oh well, it's my style and I'm never going to change for anybody. :] You too, keep doing what you do best. Good luck!
I really liked the first two chapters, but i have a pet peeve of reading when dialogue isn't on separate lines. :( Sorry, I know it's not your fault, just some formatting issue. I'll definitely get around to reading it, though, I want to know what happens next. :D I've seen some of your comments on other people's novels and you seem very helpful. If it's not too much to ask for, (you must be tired of hearing this...) but could you maybe check out mine? It's called The Formation. It's in the Realistic Fiction section. It's not nearly as good as this, though....
=D Thank you for the comment, Timekeeper. I'm glad you liked it.
I'll try to comment on SuperNOVA when possible. :)
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