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Feedback on "Locked Out"

June 1, 2016
By StanleyLigon SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
StanleyLigon SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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The poem “Locked Out” by Priscella Boamah is a cute 20-verse rhyme poem about her or her character's memories of being locked out. One of the main reasons that I liked this poem so much is because it brings to light the same reaction anyone would most likely feel about being locked out while putting a whole new perspective on it as well. Another reason that I liked this poem so much is because she took something that almost everyone can relate to at least once in their life and turned into something so much more, which is what I strive to do. I learned from you, Priscella. Thank you.



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