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Akward Love in Haiku

December 10, 2009
By Esteban BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
Esteban BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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The article "Awkward Love in Haiku" by Fish Stark is spectacular the way he explains his feelings. This Haiku gives much detailed about what he and other teens do in this situation. I can totally relate to this poem, for I am really shy. Also, the way he says the feelings he gets when in contact with her is amazing. In addition, when the girl reaches for her pencil is very interesting the way he describes the moment. Congrats to Fish for great haiku poem.


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