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September 23, 2009
By martiniLeyva BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
martiniLeyva BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
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I can relate to the poem ‘Bullet Point Life’. It’s a great poem that talks about a life that is not under control or organized. My life is not always the best. I rush and have no room to make mistakes. Also, I have to keep to my schedule and have no last minute changes. It’s just an unending to do list.

This is a great poem because it is easy to understand and many people can relate to it. Also, it paints a visual in my mind and I kind of see how this kids life is in the poem. So I know how to control my life but sometimes I just have to stop relax and take a break for a minute.

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