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September 23, 2009
By Yvette Kim BRONZE, Northridge, California
Yvette Kim BRONZE, Northridge, California
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I'm pretty freaked out.
That thing has been there for almost a week. The figure in the window. It looks featureless, only skin on a human frame, and it's pressing itself against the glass somehow. I don't know how it got there, and I don't know how to get rid of it.
At first I thought it was a prank, a doll or mannequin that some jerks put there to scare me. But I realized as I walked out of my house to pull it away... it wasn't there. I shrugged it off, thinking that someone had hidden it while I was walking through my door. But I went back in and looked out that same window, and it was looking in, staring at me. I walked around my house, yelling for whoever it was to come out, but no one was there.
The thing is hairless and naked, and it didn't look like it actually had eyes, or even a face at all. But its head is turned towards me when I enter the room. When I sit on my computer, I can feel its faceless hatred boring into my neck. But when I turn around, it's innocently turned in a different direction.
Finally on Thursday I tried to open the window, but it's stuck. I think the thing's hands are keeping it down. But I got a good look at its face. Its eyes and mouth are behind the skin, pushing outward.
It stared at me, smiling.

Of course, I screamed.
I pulled back a fist and smashed it onto the glass, determined once and for all to get rid of the glaring monster. I know I’m strong enough. That glass should’ve cracked.
But it didn’t.
It shuddered under my hand, but it didn’t break. And that smile just got wider and wider and wider, until I thought its head would break in half. It raised its own hand and bashed the window with its palm. It was mocking me. But I saw the faintest crack begin to appear where it had hit, and I backed away.
No way did I want that smile in the same room as me.
So I got a roll of duct tape, and I started covering the window. I couldn’t look directly at it; I nearly s*** my pants just knowing it was watching me. But I couldn’t help it. I took a quick glance at that skin-covered face. A small peek.
It was angry.
That menacing grin was now a gaping frown full of teeth. The skin had ripped away from its mouth and I could see down its cavernous throat. A menacing rumble started to fill the house, and that hairline crack began to spread like splintering ice. I pulled down the duct tape. The rumble stopped, the split skin healed over, and it began to smile again.
Now it’s night, and the noise hasn’t started again. There are no sounds, no rumble, no crackling glass. Everything’s quiet now.
But I can feel its claws gripping the back of my chair. I can hear its skin stretching as it smiles.
It’s watching me type.

The author's comments:
Just a generally creepy piece.

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on Oct. 6 2009 at 9:09 pm
Mocahking SILVER, Wesminister, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
I&#039;ve got 100 steps to go, tonight I&#039;ll make it 99- Superchick<br /> I love music, can&#039;t imagine bein here without it, so turn it up, let yo neighbors all hear about it!- TFK<br /> I have trouble placing my vision within the bounds of reality- ME!!!! :)

Haha great job youre a really good writer

TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 10:53 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;She walks in beauty,<br /> Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;<br /> And all that&#039;s best of dark and bright<br /> Meet in her aspect and her eyes.&quot;<br /> --Byron

This is amazing! YOu are very creative; I admire you very much. Please Please keep writing this is so gooooooood. Very nice idea. It is scary and it keeps my on edge while i read it and I just wanna keep reading. GREAT!

LaylaViolet said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 1:41 pm
Totally and awesomely creepy. Totally love it. And I totally hope you continue this or something like it. Keep on writing; you're good.