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August 2022 Fiction Contest: A Farmer's Shocking End

August 29, 2022
By nicolebettencourt BRONZE, Aptos, California
nicolebettencourt BRONZE, Aptos, California
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Favorite Quote:
“Those who don’t believe in magic will never find it.”<br /> —The Minpins by Roald Dahl


Audrey wandered to the pasture, still shocked by the loss of her father. The detectives’ final words still echoed through her mind: “Hanged himself with the milk hoses. Probably upset about selling all the cows and stopping farming.”

She inhaled the sweet clover scent and let the afternoon sun warm her. Well, she would never sell. She had told her father so repeatedly. 

“Suicide,” she said to the cows. “The detectives confirmed it. Just you and me now. Forever.”

Once Audrey left the pasture, her favorite cow Esther turned to the cow beside her. “You see? Nobody ever suspects the cows.”


The author's comments:

TW: suicide, death

My grandparents own a dairy farm and I personally enjoy helping out with all of the cows. I wanted to create flash fiction that involved them. After all, they are my favorite animals!


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Afra ELITE said...
on Aug. 30 2022 at 12:50 pm
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Good God!!! That was unexpected!!! Loved this!!!