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Seven Deadly Sins

April 6, 2022
By laynie-walloch GOLD, Hartland, Wisconsin
laynie-walloch GOLD, Hartland, Wisconsin
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His pride took over when he asked her out, and wrath when she denied. His envy grew as she went out with another. Giving in to greed, he took her home as she screamed for help. His lust turned to gluttony as he had his fill of her. He had sloth in setting her free.



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on Apr. 18 2022 at 10:32 am
The-Grim-Reaper SILVER, Hudson, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
We are all born crazy some of us remain that way<br /> <br /> We don't talk about Bruno <br /> <br /> Silenco Bruno

My brothers and sister the seven sins what a story all seven fair sins my family my brotheren. What is UP with this dude he sounds like Sangwoo from Killing Stalking- that sounds like your type of genre its a little bit mature but quite a read. Now about this piece I love how you go through all of his feelings on by one how it started as one and then turned into another and how at the end it turned into poor sloth. Very nice transitioning and the mind figures out the rest. Beautiful and short tells a whole tale in just those little words. Your creativity deserves a book full of these tales. Maybe short and wholeseome tales teehee for the imaginative. These remind me of writing prompts now my mind has created a world just from these little tales. Keep it up young mind Death follows you loyally. . .