Drunk Driver | Teen Ink

Drunk Driver

July 13, 2012
By WickedStarcatcher DIAMOND, Massapequa, New York
WickedStarcatcher DIAMOND, Massapequa, New York
67 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I don't damsel well. Distress, I can do. Damseling? Not so much."
— James Patterson
"This is the very first page, not where the storyline ends, my thoughts will echo your name until I see you again..." ~Taylor Swift "Enchanted"


Collision.
The speeding black jeep collided with Elliot’s car.
Confusion.
Elliot and his girlfriend Amber were trapped inside. Elliot calls out her name- she doesn’t answer.
Sadness.
Elliot holds her hand. She fades away-whispering last ‘I love you’s to the blue sky.
Anger.
Fury wells up in Elliot’s heart as he feels the warmth leave her body.
Grief.
Funeral Parlor. Elliot has no idea why the word “fun” is in “funeral.”
Forgiveness.
Amber wouldn’t have wanted anger at the jeep driver clouding his mind.
Pointless.
The speeding black jeep and its drunk driver collide with another car the next week.


The author's comments:
This was for a specific prompt-the story had to be just 100 words! Comment plz!! :D

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 0 comments.