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The monster

January 6, 2016
By Cocoanutpie99 BRONZE, Newport, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You&#039;ve gotta dance like there&#039;s nobody watching,<br /> Love like you&#039;ll never be hurt,<br /> Sing like there&#039;s nobody listening,<br /> And live like it&#039;s heaven on earth.&rdquo; <br /> ― William W. Purkey

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There I was,
face to face with her.
The only one
who knew me
more than anybody else
But
I have no idea
who this girl is
how to make her happy
and keep her that way.
In my left hand
I grasp
a large hammer tightly.
As warm tears
stream down my face,
I let
the hammer swing
behind my head.
I let out a simple,
“I’m Sorry,”
before releasing
a spring motion
onto the reflecting glass.
I watched it as it shattered.
“I did it!”

© Alice B., Sarasota, FL

The author's comments:

I wrote this as a practice peice in my creative writing class. I decided that it was really good and i liked it alot.

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