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Your Beauty is That of a Winter's Day

March 26, 2015
By Freny BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
Freny BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
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Your beauty is that of a winter's day
Your eyes are ice blue
Though Mother Nature plunges into decay
Thy beauty shall always be true
Your complexion her frozen tears that fall
This blankets her children deep
Then we hear her children's call
To grow, bloom and then weep
Yet you stay in heavy slumber
Never changing to summer,spring or fall
You've bloomed already in number
No reason for your rose petals to fall
                       As fair as the winter song
                       For you my love shall never be gone


The author's comments:

Not to sound cliché but I was inspired by love. By mixing my love for nature and my love for this particular girl I was able to write this poem. I was also inspired by William Shakespseare. If there was one thing I would like the reader to get away from this poem is how we are all connected with nature and how the beauty in us can be reflected in nature.


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Pseudonym said...
on Apr. 1 2015 at 10:51 am
I love the tone of this poem, and the word usage. Good job!

Jeff Stuart said...
on Mar. 31 2015 at 7:41 pm
Wow, this really touched my heart. It's total shit. You nigga are soft as a dick not fully erected.

YolandaC said...
on Mar. 31 2015 at 7:38 pm

jayjules said...
on Mar. 31 2015 at 7:31 pm
Wow. This poem absolutely touched my heart. It is so sincere. Good choice on your the words you chose. I love the poem. I'm very intrigued.