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Torn Down

November 13, 2014
By DarknessFalls PLATINUM, Alhambra, California
DarknessFalls PLATINUM, Alhambra, California
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Favorite Quote:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. -Edgar Allan Poe


She was called a waste of space and no good,
She believed every hate filled lie,
She was different, just misunderstood,
She was frail, timid and shy,
She was confused and lost,
Doing anything to be cool,
Not paying attention to the cost,
She started to realize the world is cruel,
But now she’s cut down and abused,
She wanted a friend,
Poor girl, misguided and used,
She wished it all would end,

She wanted to feel alive,
So from a big building, she took a dive.



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on Nov. 18 2014 at 7:56 pm
DarknessFalls PLATINUM, Alhambra, California
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Favorite Quote:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. -Edgar Allan Poe

Thank you! Glad it sparked emotion haha

on Nov. 18 2014 at 12:32 pm
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

Babe, this is really good!! Really sad too, like, really sad. Its so wonderfully written, and such a tear jerker too! Which isn't a bad thing. I love when a poem can make me cry. You have a serious talent darling, keep writing :)