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The Dark Becomes the Dawn

March 25, 2014
By TheDarkNite BRONZE, Kokomo, Mississippi
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TheDarkNite BRONZE, Kokomo, Mississippi
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"Are biggest Fear is not that we are inadequate, but that we are powerful beyond measure."

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The night hovers across the sky
A child quivers in her room
Soon her mother will hear her cry
But she will not escape her doom

Under her blanket the child tremors
With a very fearful frown
Beneath the child hell simmers
A demon prepares to pull her down

She pulls the blanket full of fear
but she cannot escape her fate
Then she hears her mother near
But for the child hell still awaits

Mother enters, the child is gone
And then the dark becomes the dawn

© Mary A., Fullerton, CA

The author's comments:
This is my first try, and I am not sure how this will turn out.

I originally wrote this for my teacher, but she thought it was good and suggested I posted it.
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This article has 4 comments.

TheDarkNite said...
on Mar. 31 2014 at 9:38 pm
Thank you  
TheDarkNite said...
on Mar. 31 2014 at 9:38 pm
Thank you.  I will
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 31 2014 at 9:36 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

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This poem...wow! One of the best written poems ive read yet! Great work and i suggest you keep wriitng more poetry:) I love the tone, the rhyming...everything!  
Breemckinney SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2014 at 9:35 pm
Breemckinney SILVER, Bradford, Pennsylvania
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Broken hearts and scars in only places she could see. She just wanted to feel something.

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I think you are a very talented writer.  I love how you made the words work together.