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March 9, 2014
By Blue_Moon_Princess BRONZE, Kenner, Louisiana
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"Courage does not always roar. Sometimes, its a whisper at the end of the day that says, 'we will try again tomorrow.'"

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So here's a tale of a boy and this girl.
Both from different backgrounds and different times.
They come from strange places, yet the same world.
But each day spent together, the love climbs.
She falls for him and for sure knows its love.
But Shes not a free girl, something she hates.
He falls for her, says shes sent from above.
"It's okay, baby" he says, "True love waits"
Says, "Someday I'll be yours, and you'll be mine.
We'll make this place a world of its own kind.
We'll go somewhere far, and make it out fine.
I'm gonna be the greatest love you'll find"
So he waits till the day shes finally free;
"Were gonna be one, you and me, eventually."

© Danielle L., League City, TX

The author's comments:
I fell for a close friend but wasn't allowed to be in a relationship because he was 2 years older. He told me he'd wait for me. I wrote this for him. We're now together happily. I hope y'all can relate.
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