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the power of spoken words

May 16, 2012
By omniya134 GOLD, Ota-ku, Tokyo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Never deprive someone of hope; it might be all they have.<br /> (H. Jackson Brown Jr.)<br /> &quot;Tell Me and I Will Forget; Show Me and I May Remember; Involve Me and I Will Understand.&quot;<br /> Confucius

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As the dark consumed her soul
She tried to wear the mask of might
She was a very lonely girl and sole
That she built a tower far away from the sight
A far away land where she smiles from the inside out
And that's how she survived day and night
By that's instills in her deeps fear and doubt
And that's destroys her, by the weapon of sleight
Poor little girl forced to be mature
That's when everything became obscure
Those curse at her and those yell
And that was the circle of hell
The power they obtain to demolish her tower
Poor little girl she died before blooming into a flower
The power they have, what a might unjust power
The power of spoken words, oh this mighty destructive power

© Andrew M., Stahe, Germany

The author's comments:
this poem really means a lot to me, because in a personal level spoken words affected me, it doesn't show weakness but it shows that a word can change a person's life or his way of thinking so i've wrote this poem to make me stroger and to face this kind of effective weapon.
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omniya134 GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 3:12 pm
omniya134 GOLD, Ota-ku, Tokyo, Other
14 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never deprive someone of hope; it might be all they have.<br /> (H. Jackson Brown Jr.)<br /> &quot;Tell Me and I Will Forget; Show Me and I May Remember; Involve Me and I Will Understand.&quot;<br /> Confucius

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thank you i am :)
azmi said...
on Sep. 18 2012 at 11:07 am
hope you are fine :)
omniya134 GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2012 at 9:25 am
omniya134 GOLD, Ota-ku, Tokyo, Other
14 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never deprive someone of hope; it might be all they have.<br /> (H. Jackson Brown Jr.)<br /> &quot;Tell Me and I Will Forget; Show Me and I May Remember; Involve Me and I Will Understand.&quot;<br /> Confucius

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thank you :) it' means a lot to me 
omniya134 GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2012 at 9:24 am
omniya134 GOLD, Ota-ku, Tokyo, Other
14 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never deprive someone of hope; it might be all they have.<br /> (H. Jackson Brown Jr.)<br /> &quot;Tell Me and I Will Forget; Show Me and I May Remember; Involve Me and I Will Understand.&quot;<br /> Confucius

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thank you so much :) i appreciate your comment a lot  i hope they'll publish it.. maybe not yet :)
sandysoul said...
on May. 23 2012 at 6:27 am

amazing poem it's funny they didn't publish it on teenink magazine

i loved the way you described your feelings just amazing job :)

Sunshinebeauty said...
on May. 22 2012 at 5:38 pm
Amazing poem i love it so much if they are smart they'll publish it cuz its so beautiful