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My words are twisted up into knots

December 11, 2011
By miniko PLATINUM, Germantowm, Maryland
miniko PLATINUM, Germantowm, Maryland
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i never said most of the things i said- yogi berra

My words are twisted up into knots
Tied up and compressed in a box
Waiting for the right set of key
Waiting for someone to set them free
Hoping that it will all be okay
I beat down my lips
Stopping it from releasing words that I would be able to say
I cant think, I cant sleep
I dig a hole and bury my feet
The vibration of my voice made it too deep
I’m helpless and I begin to sink
I wait for people to pass by
When the come all they can do is say hi
I have no voice to even be able to cry

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qwaszx BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 7:31 pm
qwaszx BRONZE, Canton, Massachusetts
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Sounds really good! Just watch out for spelling- you don't want mistakes to distract the reader.

on Dec. 13 2011 at 3:46 pm
ShadowOfDarkness PLATINUM, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Coute que coute(Cost What It May)

I loved it!

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 3:44 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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