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Glorious Melody of the Beast

November 22, 2011
By CaptainStar BRONZE, Estancia, New Mexico
CaptainStar BRONZE, Estancia, New Mexico
2 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your limit is what you make it.

In the quietness of the cold, still night, the beast that is Guardian to many, As it prowls to it's same to sing ab-right. Shaking an ebony mane, pleasing any. The audience that a'shines through darkness, the sense of chill and pleasure floats around. As the cries of the beast rejects greiveness. Twelve times does this event occur on ground and as the rest of the choir arrived, Then the musical of the plain began. Critters came to see the a'dancing flame, That emanated around the orb's span. Haunting the sound may be to various To one a melody that's glorious.

The author's comments:
This was originally a project for my English class and I wanted to share it.

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on Oct. 2 2012 at 7:34 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
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"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Nice! i like your word usage and the way you organized the words in your sentences.... please check out my work........ thanks!! =D

on Aug. 16 2012 at 12:16 am
WhiteStorme BRONZE, Roy, Washington
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Really good work. I wish people still wrote like "a'shines". It's lost with the young crowd. Nice job

Sabee said...
on Feb. 26 2012 at 6:14 am
Sabee, Mawanella, Other
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Love is not blind - it sees more, not less. But because it sees more, it is willing to see less!!!!!

wow!! excellent it

sabeeii said...
on Feb. 26 2012 at 6:07 am
excellent it

on Jan. 2 2012 at 2:01 pm
satellite23 GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Nice descriptions

on Jan. 2 2012 at 2:01 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Excellent work! I'm sorry, but I don't really know about proper sonnet format, so I can't give you a full critique. As far as I can see, this is perfect! Keep writing!

on Dec. 29 2011 at 1:17 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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Beautiful lines... I like it!!

on Dec. 27 2011 at 10:15 pm
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
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This is really really good

Pepper243 said...
on Dec. 27 2011 at 7:12 pm
Pepper243, ********************, Washington
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