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April 17, 2011
By Dreamer21 PLATINUM, Hockessin, Delaware
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Dreamer21 PLATINUM, Hockessin, Delaware
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To the world you might be one person, but to one person you might be the world.

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Darkness Darkness all around
I'm trapped here and am alone.
I hear not a sound
All I know is the hard cold stone.
I'm lost to the world above
Of the living and the dead
Forgotten by those I love,
Not a tear for me was shed.
And even though I feel no pain,
In this cold unmoving world
I miss the sun; I miss the rain
And the clouds that swirled.
I miss the world I once knew,
But what I miss most is you.

The author's comments:
THIS IS MY SONNET!!!!
we had to write one of our fears
mine includes dying alone, being buried alive, and dying unloved and hated
those were the three I chose but i could have done something else with my other fears
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Dreamer21 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2013 at 2:32 pm
Dreamer21 PLATINUM, Hockessin, Delaware
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Thank you so much for the comment and I would love to read your work. I'll check it out :D
Debbie1 SILVER said...
on May. 23 2011 at 5:36 pm
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This was amazing! great job! Please check out some of my wrk when you have the time :-)
MaryGabrielle BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2011 at 12:31 pm
MaryGabrielle BRONZE, Leonardo, New Jersey
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wow! this is really great! I am just starting out here and I would love if you could check out my poem Green-eyed Monster. keep writing!