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June 18, 2010
By ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

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She never believed in herself
She felt as if everything she did was wrong .
It was like her against the world
Nothing was able to keep her strong .
You never seen her put on a smile
You never seen her having a good time .
"Oh sweetie your so beautiful"
Deep down inside she knew it was a lie .
I tried to help her out . .
I used my power to help her out in every way
I told her that ..
"When your struggling and life knocks down on your knees , your in the perfect position to pray"
I told her that God is the one to go to
When everything else goes wrong .
He'll hold your hand the struggles
And help you to move on.

© Martha V., Morton Grove, IL

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Lucky7337 SILVER said...
on Oct. 8 2010 at 5:48 pm
Lucky7337 SILVER, Paris, Tennessee
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There is only one way to put this... amazing.
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Sep. 11 2010 at 9:17 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

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Thank you :] <3 & sure ill check it out now !! =]
Joob-Stache GOLD said...
on Sep. 11 2010 at 8:45 pm
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
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Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

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And if you could, I have some new poetry comming, Can you please check it out?? Thanks :)
Joob-Stache GOLD said...
on Sep. 11 2010 at 8:43 pm
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
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Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

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OMG!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! It made me cry a little. But that was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! :)
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 4:25 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

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Oh can you please check out my poem "Is there a purpose?" ... if you dont mind
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 4:21 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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"Some things will never change"---Tupac

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No problem!:)
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 4:11 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

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Thank youu =]
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 4:08 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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"Some things will never change"---Tupac

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So true, and inspirational. 

I loved the line..."When you're struggling and life knocks you down on your knees, you're in the perfect position to pray" Nicee.!

Jellybean9898 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 17 2010 at 7:52 pm
Jellybean9898 PLATINUM, Glendale, California
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"When nothing goes right, go left"-Anonymous
"Thank God men cannot fly, and lay waste to the sky as well as the Earth"-Henry David Thoreau

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so touching and so true.  cute, and inspiring.  i LIKED it. :) check out my work?
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 12:00 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

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♥ thanks
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 11:59 am
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

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awh , thank youu :] ♥
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 10:45 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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aawww, that really made me smile :))
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 9:03 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

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thank youu :] ♥
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 9:03 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

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thank youu :] ♥
waywithwords GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 9:20 pm
waywithwords GOLD, Forest Hill, Maryland
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~~Isn't it funny how the most important things in life aren't things?~~

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very good! the message is 100% true!
Danica SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 11:44 am
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
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"It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities." -- Albus Dumbledore

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I actually think this flows well, and I agree, the message is great.  It's very relatable.  Great job!  Please check out and comment on my stuff if you have the chance!
Chloe_ BRONZE said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 11:02 am
Chloe_ BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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Never underestimate the power of doing the ordinary in quite extraordinary ways.

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Good job but it seems like it doesnt flow all that well but it has a really good meaning
Angel1932 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:39 pm
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime" ~ Celine Dion
"If you're going to pray don't worry... if you're going to worry don't pray." ~ Mariah Carey

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 this is really a good job. :)