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Sactitation Confiscation

May 20, 2010
By xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
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When I needed you most
You got up and fled
You left when I was trembling
Under my bed

Earth-shattering, mind-clogging
Like a downpour of diamonds.
Abandoned by the sidewalk
I pray you are crying.

Blinding by the pain
Beautiful misery
Like satan's acupunture
Impossible diety.

You cannot imagine
So, don't take a shot.
Right now I don't know if I
Trust you or not.

Can anyone explain
The painful confusion
Or is my only hope an
Impossible dellusion?

Unlock the safe
And I'll confiscate your key
You are not permitted
To know the real me.

The author's comments:
Sorry about spelling...spelling stinks but the message rings true.......

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on Jun. 17 2010 at 1:28 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

ooooo the ending gives the target of this a real "ouch" haha it's got that "ouch" factor. a women scorned, i tell ya. great poem. this and Honey Moon Fazed are AWESOME new ones.