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DISGUISED WISH

February 23, 2010
By kitkat13579 BRONZE, Weston, Massachusetts
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When with you i feel like I'm in disguise
Attraction without love; you heartbreaker
A sudden sleep among the living; rise
Our age divides us, but brings us closer

You over come me with laughter and joy
But the same day i cry myself to sleep
Our relationship is bipolar; boy!
I feel like you're just leaving m here: cheap.

My true colors are turned grey when with you
But some days you make me bright as sunshine
Love is always on the line; what is true
I want you to see me truly one time

Love is a day on the roulette tables
Game of chance, Risky with high envied goal

The author's comments:
THERE ARE mistakes in the piece but there suppose to be like the end. the situation has turned the tables a full filling the goal. which isnt made clear in the poem like what is the goal. risky boy not having her
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Milo! said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 11:04 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.