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I Will Be Happy

November 8, 2009
By WriiteO2iinspiire SILVER, Little Falls, New Jersey
WriiteO2iinspiire SILVER, Little Falls, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
A real woman isn't perfect, and a perfect woman isn't real.


Can’t You Tell My Pain
How my Tears Glisten
Like The shallow puddles of rain
Because No One is willing to listen
I have so much to say
But no one can here
My Cries Day after Day
How At night I fear
I will Find No Other Way
To get My mind Clear
The Quiet Surrounds Me
As I sit and Listen
To the voices in my head
Telling me what is missing
There is a Hole In My heart
And it keeps getting bigger
I can’t explain
I just don’t know how to start
This is something that takes time to figure
Let me say it
Let Me Speak
I want these tears To Stop
Sliding Down My soft Cheek
I miss My Past
The Memories I had


The author's comments:
This Just came Out, I was inspired and all I did was let my heart do the typing.

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on Nov. 30 2011 at 5:28 pm
ForeverYoung90210 BRONZE, Walton, Nebraska
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This sounds like something I've written before. I know what you mean by a love preserved in the past. And the way you refer to it in a deep, yet vague manner... I can relate to the last sentence! Keep on writing .

EricForman said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:44 pm
EricForman, Texas
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Very emotional, I hope whatever you are going through gets better.

Duckie430 said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 12:20 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger.&quot;

this is really good.. wow, alot of emotion, it's just really good...

on Nov. 17 2010 at 5:39 am
rundontwalk SILVER, Perth, Other
8 articles 8 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Go within and scale the depths of your being from which your very life springs forth.&quot;<br /> <br /> -Rainer Maria Rilke

this is beautiful. really, truly beautiful.

it would be so awesome if you could look at some of my stuff even though they're nothing compared to this :)


on Oct. 4 2010 at 1:53 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

omg I love this . every line every word . . simply powerful . amazing job . please check and rate my work ? :)

on Jul. 8 2010 at 1:28 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

thats cool how this came straight from ur heart :) theres real meaning. good job ^^

on Jun. 18 2010 at 3:42 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

That was so good !  Don't ever stop  writing :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u


Swiwi17 SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 2:33 pm
Swiwi17 SILVER, Glasscity, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Nothing ever promised tomorrow today&quot;

This is simply amazing

on May. 14 2010 at 9:08 am
Cancion_de_hielo_y_fuego BRONZE, Murfreesboro, Tennessee
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I really like how heartfelt this was: it really laid bare your emotions. Great job.

xxkelvin28xx said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:46 pm
i love it really good you know who this is =D

Hamburglar said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 6:28 am
Hamburglar, Sibley, Missouri
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This poem definitely has something a million other poems don't. It has feeling. The other poems that have been revised a thousand times and checked for spelling and edited for grammar and were created so mechanically don't have the emotion that this does. I hope you continue to write, and use writing as an emotional vent. Your writing is good.

on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:19 pm
dude, you should totallly teelll all your friends to rate this..its truly amazinq ! i hope it gets published yo, this is realll good stuf almost made me shed a tear loll.

meemee said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:17 pm
i loveed thiss !!

everyone should rate this five stars !

ii really hope it gets published (:

on Dec. 22 2009 at 4:30 pm
Claudia-Amador234 BRONZE, West Roxbury, Massachusetts
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This really good congrats

crazykim said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 10:38 pm
My favorite. Thanks so much for sharing this, you truly are so so talented.