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October 16, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Beginnings

When you waked in the room,
You immediately caught my eye.
I couldn't help but stare,
I'm not going to lie.

There was an instant attraction,
That I'd never felt before.
Every time you looked at me,
I always craved for more.

When we talked, my words would jumble,
I couldn't find the right thing to say.
My voice would quiver, my knees would shake,
You simply took my breath away.

Every time you were around,
I would trip over my own two feet.
Each time your hand held mine,
My heart would skip a beat.

Now that we're together,
Thoughts of you fill my day.
Every time you kiss me,
My worries drift away.

I look forward to our future,
Making new memories as we go.
Sharing all the simple pleasures,
Together as we grow.

© Hadley B., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem for my boyfriend as one of his Sweetest Day gifts. I hope you enjoy it as much as he did!
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ElizabethHolt BRONZE said...
on Apr. 27 2012 at 9:48 am
ElizabethHolt BRONZE, Grandville, Michigan
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This is GREATTT! I loved it!!! the ryhming made it 10x betterrr!!!!! AWESOME JOB!

 

bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:08 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thanx:) i appreciate ur opinion!
Tobbie14 SILVER said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 10:10 pm
Tobbie14 SILVER, Wasilla, Alaska
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Nice work on the poem. it really has a lot of emotion built into it. Keep it up!
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 1:58 am
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND, Westminster, California
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amazing! i love it, it sounds so sweet and innocent just like true love should always be <3
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 1:38 pm
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love it! :) very sweet and pure. great job! :)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 10:45 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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The first line is suposed to be "when you walked in the room" sry!