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Life a mystery

March 23, 2015
By happymoment........ BRONZE, Kerala, Other
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happymoment........ BRONZE, Kerala, Other
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"Always be happy"

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Life is like a poem

We all are words in it

Problems are the gap between lines

Happiness are the gap between words

 

How sweet is our life??

How sweet a poem is??

Gladness sorrowness all are a part

What a life it is??

© Rachel M., Camarillo, CA

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This poem is written on the inspiration of my own life...

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happymoment........ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2017 at 12:27 pm
happymoment........ BRONZE, Kerala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Always be happy&quot;

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thanks LotusChild
happymoment........ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2017 at 12:27 pm
happymoment........ BRONZE, Kerala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Always be happy&quot;

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thanks ElisabethG
lizziexo BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2017 at 10:09 am
lizziexo BRONZE, Caen, Other
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Beautiful :)
LotusChild PLATINUM said...
on May. 28 2015 at 9:28 am
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Hm... This left me with mixed emotions. I enjoyed the analogy at the beginning, however... I feel that the rhythm is a bit interrupted (but that's a personal preference thing, so don't worry about it too much). I think that there's a beauty in the simplicity of this poem that is a bit more subtle than it has to be, but still it's a great piece, I enjoyed it! Make more :3
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on May. 28 2015 at 9:11 am
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this it were all your new things
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on May. 14 2015 at 9:34 am
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Be proud of who you are.<br /> -Eminem<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t see me<br /> -John Cena<br /> <br /> Ooh, somebody stop me!<br /> -Mask

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Thats wonderful! @cutedollgirl will you check and comment on my work? :) TeenInk.com/video/dancing/114206/The-Unbeatable-Breakdancer