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Set Free

November 29, 2013
By jessdodd95 BRONZE, Coventry, Other
jessdodd95 BRONZE, Coventry, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Practice makes Perfect


Verse 1
Don’t know if I’m wrong
Don’t know if I’m right
Don’t know if I should say
Or keep it inside?
Just what is this feeling
That’s growing in me?
Could it possible
That love was set free

Chorus
I know that your eyes shine
When you stare into mine
While I know that my heart is real
I’m unsure if its love I feel

Verse 2
Can’t say that I`m sure
Can’t say that I know
Can’t say that I should stay
Or should I just go?
Don’t ask me for answers
Because there not always there
But should other girls
Feel like their walking on air?

Chorus

Don’t ask me for answers, because there not always there
But should other girls feel like their walking on air?
Just what is this feeling that growing in me?
Could it be possible that love was set free?

Chorus

Just what is this feeling thats growing in me?
Could it be possible that love was set free?


The author's comments:
This song took me a long while to write. It has a lot of personal meaning to me. I wrote it when I was at a confusing stage in my life. I thought I had everything sorted and then I started having feeings for someone I shouldnt, but I didnt know what they were. Writing them down and expressing them heped me realise that I had fallen in love with them.
Enjoy it :) x

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on Jun. 6 2014 at 10:17 am
This song is the best out of the ones that you have submitted, I think it is quite emotional and it conveys your story prefectly. This is the kind of song that you should be writing.

Summerset01 said...
on May. 14 2014 at 6:00 pm
This song is extremely emotional . I can tell that you wrote it when you were confused and at a crossroads in your life. You obviously aren't a natural writer because you structure the song to rigidly. Be a bit more creative with your structure because the emotion and detail is there. You obviously need a little bit of help as you are a little rusty around the edges. You have great potential. Here is a tip. Next time you write a song about a person. Imagine them right next to you and write it less like a song and more a declaration. That way it will sound more real. Not that I am saying this isn't real, it just feels like you wrote it for the song! Jess, which I am assuming your name is, you can really write well so you have the creative part just stop playing t safe and take a risk. Risks pay off

alexisnova11 said...
on May. 1 2014 at 10:59 am
This song is absolutely amazing. This person obviously made you feel good, I just think you are a bit repetitive. The power and message is strong, its seems too structures, it should flow more that's all.